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“Move you bucket of bolts! Faster!!” A peaceful night’s rest in the flamed city ruins turned to a nightmare in hell as a sea of metallic bodies marched into the blazes. Smoke towered from what was left of the City of Divine light and stretched towards the crimson sky. An egg shaped man with a large brown mustache sat in the cockpit of his white hover car and smiled evilly. "Hohohoh!!" he laughed hysterically, fiddling with his glasses. "At any rate the all powers of the City of Divine Light will be in my grasp! Soon the last of the Guardian Angel’s life source will be mine and no one, not even that pesky blue hedgehog, could stop me!" As he spoke millions of robots in metallic armor dragged out anything that seemed valuable to their boss. Amulets, weapons, jewelry, anything that could have hidden power from the deceased tribe. Suddenly, a pair of bushes standing in front of an opened white house rustled. One robot stopped its mindless marching and turned to the bushes sensing for any life. It’s vision screen flashed a bright white color as it verified that there was something living there. "DETECTING TARGET." it said loudly. It broke away from the others and walked towards the bush. It stared for a few minutes in a deathly silence as the flames of the burning city cackled menacingly. Suddenly, a bright light erupted from the bush and burst out into view. All of the robots stopped what they were doing, dropped their stolen items, and aimed their cannons at it. It fired several beams of light destroying every robot precisely. Then it turned to the egg man and flew off. "Oh no you don't!" he growled fiercely and shot a shadowy black beam at the light. At first, it seemed as if the fat man missed as the light kept flying off, but about a couple of miles out the light dropped to the ground below. It landed with the sound of an intense explosion. "Yes!!" exclaimed the evil man, seemingly pleased. "Now to collect my prize!" Just then a red wolf walked up to him. He was wearing grey pants and black and grey boots. His silver eyes stared at the doctor intensely. “Dr. Eggman,” he started ruffling his ruby hair. “We don’t even know precisely where she landed.” Dr. Eggman sat back in his seat and thought a minute. “True, but we at least know where to search.” He replied with a smirk. “And my dear boy, soon. That power will be mine. And you will get your cut.” The wolf scoffed but then went back into ranks with the robots. “Forward!!” commanded Eggman aloud. “TO THE GREEN HILLS!!!” The robot’s continued their march towards the light that had dropped.

The next day a blue hedgehog was racing through the serene morning scene. His quick speed unmatched, carried him through the park as he frantically looked around for someplace to hide. Suddenly, he stopped right in front of a black hedgehog with crimson streaks and a silver white hedgehog, who were both laughing at him. "Shadow, Silver, stop laughing at me!" snapped the blue one pulling at his white socks, with a pouty expression. "Running away from Amy again, I see." Silver retorted with a sly smile folding his arms. “Aren’t we, Sonic?” Shadow smirked. It was a no brainer that he was doing that AGAIN. Sonic laughed sarcastically and sighed. “Yeah, yeah, yeah. When you get into the same situation let me know so I can give you a taste of your own medicine.” “Haha! Good luck with that!” Countered the silver hedgehog levitating a soda can towards his hand. Suddenly a yellow two tailed fox hovered over the trio, an excited expression was plastered onto his face. "Hey, Tails!" greeted Sonic anxious to change the subject about Amy. "What's up?" Tails landed and ran up to Sonic excitedly. His blue eyes were gleaming in the sunlight. "Did you hear that explosion that sounded last night?" Sonic nodded. "It WAS pretty loud. Kind of hard to miss." Tails nodded. "I heard it too." Commented Silver after taking a sip from his soda. “Same here.” Added Shadow  "It sounded like it was coming from the eastern direction, near the Green Hills." They all turned towards the direction he was pointing to. "Alright, let's go check it out!" Sonic exclaimed excitedly and was the first one out of sight. “Wait!” Protested Tails shouting after him. “Hold on! Wait for us!” Shadow sighed exasperatedly. "Typical," he muttered under breath and followed Sonic with Silver and Tails not too far behind. Sonic was feeling excited, he was always up for something interesting and from the looks of things, whatever hit last night was something different. “If I know anything,” he said as he ran faster. “This might start me on my next adventure.”

It wasn’t long before Sonic had reached Green Hills. He continued on feeling the thrill and excitement to see what had landed on Mobius last night. Naturally he was the first to get there. He turned to three advancing figures headed his way. “Come on! You guys need to hurry up!” he exclaimed with a smirk on his face. “Shut up, Sonic!” snapped Shadow folding his arms. “Besides you know just as well as I do that I can run just as fast…”Sonic laughed out loud at his friend. “Now who’s laughing?” Thud. “We still are, Speedy Klutz.” Retorted Silver with a mischievous smile. Tails looked around to see what his best friend had tripped over. Sonic was on his face lying over a body. The body was surrounded by a small crater and was deeply embedded in the ground. “What the heck was that?” exclaimed the blue blur spitting out clods of dirt from his mouth, bitterly. Silver blinked stunned. “It’s a fox.” He said quietly. The fox was female and her entire font side of her body was encased in earth. Her long ears were pressed to the ground limp. Her long cream hair was messy as if she had been in some sort of skirmish and her clothes were stained with blood and soil. She didn’t even look like she was breathing “Is she okay?” asked Sonic concerned, standing up from his fall. Tails checked her pulse. “Barely.” He answered with a worried tone in his voice. “I’m not surprised, if she’s the one who made this crater.” Replied Shadow folding his arms looking aloof. “Aw come on, Shads! Don’t be like that!” “Well, isn’t it obvious.” The black hedgehog stated to the blue one. “She’s lucky she’s still alive.” Sonic sighed. “True but still.” “Wait! Guys!” shouted Tails. “She’s waking up!” The cream fox slowly sat up, wincing every time she moved a muscle. “W-Where?” she started with a dazed look. Her face was that of an shy girl and her lavender eyes were clouded in pain and confusion. “Are you okay?” asked Silver trying to be of help. “I hope she doesn’t have amnesia.” Muttered Sonic quietly to himself causing Shadow to give him a deathly glare. Suddenly the five heard a wolf howl followed by evil cackling. The fox’s eyes widened as she quickly backed way. “No! Not him!” she cried quivering. The four saw the girl’s reaction and turned to each other. “Now, I’m not sure about the howl,” stated Sonic, pushing his carelessness aside. “but that laugh DEFIANTLY is familiar.” Tails’ eyes widened. “Eggman must have done this to her!” he exclaimed. The blue blur nodded, emerald eyes now looking determined. “Okay guys. Get ready.” He turned to his two tailed buddy. “Take her as far away from here as you can!” he commanded. “We’ll take care of Eggman!” Tails nodded and helped the girl up. “Let’s get out of here!” he exclaimed running of with her. The fox nodded and walked with Tails back to safety.

Soon enough, the man of the hour showed up with his usual foolish grin. “Sup, Eggman!” replied Sonic casually. “I haven’t seen you in an entire month.” Eggman wagged his index finger slowly. “Don’t worry about what I was up to, Sonic.” He started as casually as the blue hedgehog. “You’ll find out soon enough. Now where is the fennec fox?” “What’s it to you, Doctor?” asked Shadow with a growl, in an intense tone. “See, I’m still not done with my month’s hiatus and if you tell me where she is, I won’t attack you till I’m done.” “We’re not telling you a word.” declared Silver seriously. Eggman sighed. “Well, I see I’ll have to go the hard way for you three.” Sonic clicked his tongue. “Since when did we ever go the easy way?!” he shouted before jumping into the air and curling up into a blue ball. He banged himself against the windshield of Eggman’s hover car and reflected off. Sparks burst out everywhere as the hover car tilted backwards. An angry man sat up in and growled. “As true as that is I’m not letting you off the hook with that.” Suddenly, a red wolf with grey boots popped out of nowhere and stood in the distance. His silver eyes glowed menacingly in the sunlight as he stared at the three. The wolf howled loudly summoning a robot. It was ten feet tall and shadowy like. It had a metallic skull like face and it hunched over like a creature of some sort. “What the hell?!” exclaimed Shadow stepping backwards. “That’s different.” Remarked Sonic with a slight smile. “SHUT UP!!” exclaimed Eggman flailing his arms. “Now Fiend 01! Destroy these pesky hedgehogs while I find the Angel of Light!” Sonic attacked Eggman again with a homing attack, this time cutting through the engine of the hover car. It exploded causing Eggman to blast off like a rocket ship hurling up towards the sky. Suddenly, the wolf growled and headed in his direction. “Crap.” Muttered Sonic, then he shrugged. Shadow and Silver were attacking the robot. It proved to be much more challenging than Eggman’s other robots as every time they tried to attack it the robot kept deflecting the attack and countering with an intense blow. “Where did he get the idea to create this thing?!” shouted Silver as the robot’s claws just barely grazed over his head. Shadow rolled away from its tail as it nearly pounded him with it. “As far as the doctor’s mind is concerned, I don’t even care where he got the idea!” he retorted with a glare. A spark of light shown with in his left hand and it began to take the form of a spear made of bright crimson energy. “Chaos Spear!!” he shouted throwing it at the creature’s eyes. It hit causing the robot to make a mad dash towards Shadow. It made weird growling sounds as it approached. Silver then focused his energy into a large cyan blade-like wave. Without hesitation he waved his left hand throwing it towards the monster. “Take this!” he shouted as it left him and sliced through part of the robot’s metallic armor. It turned towards him then ran after him. Before it could even get to the future hedgehog, it was shot by another Chaos spear, then a Psychic Knife. Frustrated, it groaned then roared creating spheres of energy that shot out of its head and spread around, homing in on its targets. Shadow and Silver quickly dodged the attacks as best as they could, trying especially not to get hit. “We could use your help, Sonic!” shouted Silver moving quickly away from the energy spheres. “I have my own problems!” retorted the blue hedgehog as he landed a punch on the wolf sending him hurling backwards. The wolf growled and lashed at Sonic, this time setting himself on fire. “Gah!” yelled the blue wonder dodging the attack quickly. The wolf threw several fireballs at Sonic and attempted to also cheap shot Silver and Shadow. He placed his hands to the ground and caused a geyser of fire to erupt near the two hedgehogs. Luckily, the two dodged causing the robot to catch on fire. It screeched loudly as it felt the flames gorge against its black skin. The screech was a bone chilling sound but it made the trio realize that the robot was, instead, a cyborg like creature. Sonic made a mad speed dash towards the red wolf and hit him with an intense blow, knocking him over face first into the ground. The wolf turned over onto his backside and growled at the hedgehog then turned to the creature. 

“Quit fooling around and kill them!” he shouted fiercely. The creature wasn't listening. Fiend 01 began running around, frantically trying to put out the fire it’s master had set on itself. Suddenly, it ran towards Shadow with flaming red eyes. As soon as it got close, Shadow punched it’s face, sending it skidding backwards and damaging the skull helmet. Then it stood there, growling. It’s robotic parts, suddenly locked up, leaving the creature defenseless. “Now’s our chance!” shouted Sonic to the other two as he joined up with them. Fiend 01 snarled and screeched again, this time much more louder than the first time. It’s tail swayed as it’s body begun to glow a bright violet color. Shadow closed his eyes and focused his energy while Sonic and Silver kept wailing on it in all directions. The cyborg roared and forced it’s robotic parts to work breaking it’s left leg in the process. Despite that, it still was very much a threat. It stood on it’s hind legs and slashed at Sonic as he made contact with a homing attack. The claws felt like knife blades skewering against his skin. “OW!” grunted Sonic landing on his face from the attack. He looked at he cut on his right leg and growled. Silver kept attacking by gathering large sums of nearby rocks, trees, and other objects from the Green Hills. “Meteor SMASH!!” he shouted throwing the debris at the monster. Fiend 01 leaped into the ball of bound objects and smashed through them. Silver, out of surprise grabbed a tree with his telekinesis and began to bat it away from him like a baseball. The creature landed on it’s feet with a heavy metallic thud. Shadow opened his eyes and released a large dome like crimson energy engulfing the monster. “Chaos Blast!” he shouted as the energy was released from his body. The cyrborg growled and screeched in pain as it’s left leg completely broke. It froze in a final panic and turned to it’s master. A bright green sphere in it’s chest, glowed brightly as lights emitted from it and it froze. Shadow stopped his attack and backed away from the monster as its robotic armor began to crack. Suddenly, the robot exploded sending fragments of its metallic body everywhere. A thick silence hung in the air as the three looked at the debris from the enemy they had just fought. Suddenly, they heard laughing. It was the wolf, still sitting down where he was knocked. He was chuckling sinisterly and almost manically. “You think that is it?” he asked with a smirk. “I’d watch my back if I was you because this is only the beginning.” Then he disappeared in a plume of fire. Sonic dusted his hands off then looked at his leg again. It was turning red and deeply cut. “Oh man,” he started after a few moments of silence. “Glad that’s over. That thing got my leg pretty good.” He sighed and turned to the other two. “We better go see if Tails and that other fox made it okay.” Shadow and Silver nodded and took off. Pushing pain aside, Sonic took off with the cut partially hampering his speed.

Okay. Well this is the first chapter of Angels of Chaos. Please let me know if I have made any mistakes. I read over it but sometimes I tend to miss things. I hope you like. :3 I worked really hard on it.

CHARACTERS
:bulletblue: Orchid the Fennec Fox
:bulletred: Eric the Wolf
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xLucariogalx Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! My friend finally print it and I read it! It's TOTALLY AWESOME! I seriously love Eric's personality and how he takes his role as villan. Yeah, just one thing I noticed. I think the first time you described Eric wearing "black boots and gray pants" the second time you mentioned his clothing, you mentioned he wear gray boots, but besides it I think it's ok =)
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StardustEmerald12 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thanks. Yeah. X3 lol. I did? ^^; Thanks for pointing that out. Sometimes I make typos that escape me. I'll go on and fix that. X3
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xLucariogalx Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD You're welcome! I hope to read some more soon! =D
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StardustEmerald12 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
Sure. :3
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xLucariogalx Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! =D
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PZYCHO-PISTOL Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I LUV IT >:3 x3 well written! :D
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StardustEmerald12 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thanks! :3
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PZYCHO-PISTOL Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem...
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Kurai667 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
epic wifey. I got to read more..... This is already good :)
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StardustEmerald12 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thank you. :D There will be more coming up really soon. :)
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